Assignment Draft

Peer's Assignment Draft

Drew’s comments on my topic proposal turned out to be helpful. Using his recommendation to find statistics on the spread offense, I researched the history of how much an average NFL player has made. He also made a good point that since there isn't much research on my topic, it might be difficult writing eight full pages. Finding this to be true, I decided to analyze the information I had found and then come up with my own ideas on why the spread offense took so long to develop.

My Draft Reflection

Peer's Draft Reflection

I made a comment about how Elon Musk, a space exploration activist, wants to take humans to Mars within a decade. Drew’s topic talks about the positive and negative effects of space exploration. I think that the private sector of space exploration, if funded and run by the right people could prove to be very useful in our mission to explore space. Drew talks mostly about NASA in his proposal. I also mentioned that a timeline could help the reader understand that space exploration is a fairly new topic. I hope comments were useful to him.